Hi, Bob. If the piece you're referring to is "Invalid Item" , then I just reviewed it. Maybe I should have said something, but I thought it was a little strange that you were writing it in the present tense/first person. Personally, I don't think that's going too be easy. The only real suggestion I have for you would be to either change the tense or go to 3rd person. Sorry. That's all I got.
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, then I just reviewed it. Maybe I should have said something, but I thought it was a little strange that you were writing it in the present tense/first person. Personally, I don't think that's going too be easy. The only real suggestion I have for you would be to either change the tense or go to 3rd person.
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