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I found your work on "The Review Spot". I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful. Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: At first these words were confusing, it took a few moments for me to realize this was a turkey having a conversation with a human. But, as I read, and re-read the passages, the words struck cords of compassion and love. This could have been a very sarcastic or ironic piece of writing, but it wasn't. Artistic Voice and Imagery: I've never conceived of the idea of an intelligent, talking turkey, but somehow you made it work. Kudos for your imagery and ability to make this a serious sad story about compassion, acceptance and a caring spirit. Grammar No errors noted. Suggestions: No suggestions to be made by me. Thank you for sharing your fiction. Write On! |
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