Well, I can say one very positive thing about this branch.
It has a solid physical description and a little bit of the attitude of Lisa Rickover. Definitely she's not like I imagined her, though now I visually compare her with Eva Garner. (She's the one with the blonde bob, right?)
But yeah - I can see that it was kinda forced and pushed, rather than evolving naturally. Maybe it's because Cody's not exactly a choice that Chelsea could use - her reaction to "wait, who!?" kinda expresses your reaction.
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