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Sep 30, 2023 at 10:04pm
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Review of "The Note On The Cruise"

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There are a couple of proof reading errors that you might want to update:
cabins air conditioner - cabin's air conditioner (Possessive)
steak-out - should be Stake out (steak is used for the food)
Was this some type of shady deal going on - should have a question mark at the end
waiters suit - should waiter's suit.


Note: I cut it very close but this should be review 10 for me. *Smile*
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1 Ticket Please · 09-30-23 10:04pm
by KingsSideCastle
Re: 1 Ticket Please · 10-01-23 11:07am
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