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Apr 28, 2024 at 6:14pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentar...
by Nostrum
The description always places him in an unfavorable spot, though.

Take the teeth, for example. Most of the times Will's teeth are described, they're done so as comically large - yet, comparing the reference photos, Joe has larger teeth. Though it works as a way to emphasize his low self-esteem (particularly when describing himself on the mirror, or on a "out-of-body" experience), when it comes to visualize him as-is, it leads to a less flattering mental picture than the reference shows.

Of course, not everyone's mental picture is the same - a reference photo can bring up two different descriptions because people focus on different things, and a description can conjure two vastly different mental pictures because you draw from what you know.

That's why I was surprised that Will's reference photo shows he's not that bad looking. For one, though it demonstrates his stiff hair, I imagined it a lot drier. And as for the teeth, I imagined him with a slight overbite - the reference shows a full smile but not an unpleasant one. Because the description didn't support a different image, I was led to believe that his looks were a big part of the lack of attractiveness - that it was an equal complement to his poor charisma and sense of self, rather than one magnifying the other. ("You'd look better if you fix up a bit" doesn't necessarily help.)
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Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-20-24 4:43pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-20-24 5:13pm
by rugal b.
Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-20-24 7:01pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-21-24 1:00pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-22-24 12:20pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-26-24 8:24pm
by Nostrum
Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-27-24 3:51am
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-27-24 10:59am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-27-24 3:21pm
by Easy
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-27-24 4:56pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It... · 04-27-24 5:31pm
by Nostrum
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It... · 04-28-24 4:27am
by Easy
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Doe... · 04-28-24 8:38am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith... · 04-28-24 5:09pm
by Nostrum
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: K... · 04-28-24 5:31pm
by rugal b.
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by Nostrum
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Comme... · 04-28-24 6:32pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: C... · 04-28-24 6:40pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: R... · 04-28-24 7:02pm
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: R... · 04-28-24 8:08pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: C... · 04-28-24 6:59pm
by Nostrum
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Comme... · 04-28-24 6:33pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Doe... · 04-28-24 8:50am
by Seuzz
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith... · 04-28-24 12:31pm
by Easy
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith... · 04-28-24 6:36pm
by ThePrussian
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Commentary: Keith Does It Again · 04-27-24 5:08pm
by rugal b.

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