Okay, I just want to let everyone know that I am finished with the first part of "The Child", but still have not finished typing it out. I'm working on part two "Origins", and I will tell you, that mainly in part one you don't understand anything, but in part two almost everything is explained. Hense, this makes all the dragging of part one fall into place, yes even the drags mean something in the story. It makes the story make more sense and hold life to it. Part 2 is much better. I will try to post both part one and part two soon. I will keep you informed. Thanks.
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