Lyrically Speaking

hmmm, I'm not really sure about it, play around with it. Are you working on any other pieces? maybe you can work them in together... I've done that with a couple of pieces before

I'm actually in the same boat with this [it's a couple of months old now, and still have no idea]:

You don't seem to care,
It's not fair
Your outside of me
There's nothing I can do
It only lasts for awhile
Like a dead star (burning bright)

Stick with it Cerianwen, it will come to you eventually The 1st verse of my piece "Invalid Item"  was actually a starting point for "Invalid Item"  [rated as such for it's contraversal religious theme, don't read it if you get offended easily] - by the end of the Forsaken draft, it no longer fitted, but I thought it sounded very cool and kept it on hold, happened to fit in perfectly with what I was doing with Never There.

Good luck with it, sorry I couldn't be much more help

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Check it out ==>> "Invalid Item" 



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