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 Drowning in the Sink  [13+]
A dark poem about one's internal struggles.
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Review by Ms. J
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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The following is my opinion. Take what you want and pitch the rest.

I find this poem interesting. Soul searching can be a frightening experience, and you've used imagery here that helps create that mood.

The title did catch my eye because normally a full grown person wouldn't drown in the sink. After reading your poem, I interpret the sink as the dirty waste water from our lives. Hope that helps.

Regards,
Ms. J
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