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by A Guest Visitor
Review of I'm Just A Tree  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Everyday is Earth Day!
Please note - Any suggestions are my personal opinion.
Feel free to use them or ignore them! *MushroomG* *MushroomO*


I absolutely love the idea of a little tree wanting to grow up, that's - well - so CUTE! The title and description led me to click on this item, and the image, poem and links you've provided go well together to give your message. The simple rhyme scheme and language work effectively to make a pretty powerful statement. I love the alliteration in the stanza about the wind.

My only suggestion is to use WritingML - colour, bold and size, to increase the impact of your words.

*Pawprints**Pawprints**Pawprints**Pawprints* Write On! *Pawprints**Pawprints**Pawprints**Pawprints*
- Sonali


*LeafG*Review given on behalf of "The Earth Day Challenge" *LeafG*

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