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The Evergreen  [E]
God gives what man destroys, then God gives...
by Brian K Compton
Review of The Evergreen  
In affiliation with Earth Day Challengers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi bkcompton,

I’m Julie D - PUBLISHED! and I’m reviewing your poem, "The Evergreen" .

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Title *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This is a good title that fits your poem well. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Flow/Rhythm *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Flow is good; line-to-line transition and breaks are done well. Your poem has a very nice rhythm to it. *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Word Choice/Spelling/Punctuation *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
Your word choice is quite good. I see no spelling or punctuation errors. Great job! *Star*

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Helpful Tips for Improvement *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
None, I like it the way it is.

*FlowerP* *ButterflyV* Overall Impression *ButterflyV* *FlowerP*
This was a thoroughly enjoyable read that was very well penned. I also enjoyed how all of your formatting, from the changes in text color and centering, make your words into the shape of an evergreen. That's very creative and quite pleasing to the eyes! *Wink* Well done. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the good work! WRITE ON!! *Star*

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