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Dear God 3/3/2011  [E]
Letters to God thanking him for things He is teaching me.
by lifesong
Review of Dear God 3/3/2011  
Review by Jason
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A REVIEW FROM Jason

OF YOUR PIECE ENTITLED:Dear God 3/3/2011


*Vignette2* FEELINGS *Vignette2*
*Right*This was one of the most sincere prayers I have ever read. I came right from the heart. I felt every word.

*Vignette2* THOUGHTS *Vignette2*
*Right*You talked about How you feel the joy. You talk about where you feel the joy. You talk about where it comes from and you answer a lot of the questions all of us have kept in heart. A great expression of love.

*Vignette2* WHAT I LIKED THE MOST *Vignette2*
*Right*This is my favorite line:

"You love me so much that it wasn't enough to be with me, you went a step further in intimacy by taking permanent residence within my heart."

I thought that was a very dear comment. That you will always have that someone. "A permanent resident."

*Vignette2* SUGGESTIONS *Vignette2*
*Right*I liked it. I have now suggestions. Although I think it would be cool if you added a picture of the clouds or something. You might think thats dumb, I don't know, thats just me.

*Vignette2* OVER ALL *Vignette2*
*Right*A very deep and heart rooted expression of god, Good form of poetry and great word choice.

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