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The Eagle  [13+]
A Romantic Poem about eternal love
by Norswede
Review of The Eagle  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Norswede
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled The Eagle.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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I loved the bautiful description of the powerful eagle and the beautiful nature around it.The description here is very finely done. I could see vivid images of that eagle, the pretty maiden and I could see very well what happened to him and how she was crying bitterly over her beloved.

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I don't know if that is just me or what, but I think the poem is based on a legend or so which may be familiar where you but I don't know it, so I couldn't really get the brief description nor the relation between the eagle and the maiden. I am sorry but I really hope to know it.


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William Wordsworth



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