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 Oscar's Life  [E]
For the Poem A Day contest-Prompt-free verse about cats
by tarabites
Review of Oscar's Life  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello tarabites
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Oscar's Life.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

That is a nice poem about a lazy cute cat that is just enjoying its life, feeling lazy as it wished. I loved those small beautiful eyes that opened and closed slowly to glance at her owner. The cat is simply acting naturally and freely. I also love how the end shows that the cat cares about its own well being and wouldn't show any signs of respect and care till it feels hungry. That is a cute poem.

Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.
William Wordsworth



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