interesting poem, I liked some of the energetic wording you've used. I have always liked center-justified poetry because it gives an architectural look to the work, so this piece was pleasing to the eye. But, the third paragraph down is a little too short - the rhythm felt off. I also felt like your lines were not consistent in length throughout, so the cadence wasn't what I'd hoped for.
As is usual for me, I must tell you that poetry seems best when it evokes emotion. This one has too many thought verbs: followed, looked, brought, political, thinking.... And not enough of the feeling verbs.
Please take all suggestions in the spirit of helpfulness! And freely throw out any that don't make sense for you!

Thanks for your wondrous mind and keep writing!

Beckyl
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