Review of showering acts of joy member to member for 832harry

Why I chose this piece: Anniversary

Overall impression of piece I like how you describe a curmdgeon and never once use the word

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems ok

What I liked? You give us a personal look at what most people would call a diffcult person. Maybe people are difficult because they live in a world that only they understand. You make this personal in describing walking style. Obviously MAc is used to this and knows how to take him. He is profane, but that is just the way he is. Canatankerous probably only understands cantankerous. There are only certain ways to get things done. I like the affection that is built into some of the lines

What I disliked: Can't think of anything

How the piece made me feel: Real life is complicated. A man who yells alot can have a soft compliant side. I think that is not that unrealistic., It worked for me

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