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*Reading*Title:
YOUR COMMENTS The title caught my eye out of all your wonderful work. It peaked my interest. It fits this poem perfectly.

*Flower1*First Impression:
YOUR COMMENTS I have to say that my first impression was from the discription. I love my children so I thought this would be a good read for me.

*Quill*Flow/Showing
YOUR COMMENTS The flow was good in this poem. Showing is not a factor on poems for the most part.

*Idea*Suggestions:
YOUR COMMENTS None that I could see off hand.

*Apple*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:
YOUR COMMENTS None that I could see off hand.

*Star*Things I Like:
YOUR COMMENTS I love the sentament of this poem. As a mother of so many, I find it awesome that another mother would see her children as I see mine. I feel blessed to be given them and to get to see them grow. This poem shows I am not alone. In a world where you see so many horror stories about mothers harming or not loving their children, this is a good read. One every much needed. Thank you for writing and sharing this.


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