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 And the dust will lie without memory  [E]
A little musing on life and Death.
by CallMeBaka
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading*Title:
YOUR COMMENTS I love this title, it works for this poem perfect. I draws you in and makes you want to read more.

*Flower1*First Impression:
YOUR COMMENTS This seems like a deep subject, one that you did with taste and caring.

*Quill*Flow/Showing
YOUR COMMENTS The flow was great in this poem, I found this to be an easy to read poem. Not one I had to keep rereading to understand.

*Idea*Suggestions:
YOUR COMMENTS None that I could see off hand.

*Apple*Punctuation/Spelling/Grammar:
YOUR COMMENTS None that I could see off hand.

*Star*Things I Like:
YOUR COMMENTS There is a depth to this poem that I really like. I love how you let the reader pick out of it what they want to think. You only advised to live, not how to live. I honestly think you did a great job of writing a poem this deep. Write On!


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