Hi, my name is Bertie. I am reviewing this short story on behalf of WDC POWER REVIEWERS GROUP A DOZEN DELIGHTS AUCTION.
I am so sorry that I have not gotten back to you sooner. I have a deal of problems with arthritis in my hands and arms. I will do a few of your reviews today and spread them out if that is all right with you.


TITLE: YOUR STORM EYES

THEME: Why do recurrent melodies get stuck in our heads? Here's one answer.


STRUCTURE: Well structured, never lagged as to story line. Although the action is rather static, (ie: the protagonist's only action is running,) the story is in no way dull. Without the action of running, the story line would not pay off in the end. Well handled.


SPELLING, GRAMMAR, AND PUNCTUATION: There are no errors in these categories. It is obvious that you edit your work. I much appreciate writers who take their time to edit.


MY OVERALL IMPRESSION: This is a good story. The intrigue over the song is fed out patiently and is revealed skillfully at the end.


MY FAVORITE PARTS: The brevity and the way that you get so much into so short a story.


MY SUGGESTIONS: So well done. My only suggestion is to continue to write good and entertaining stories such as these.



Thank you for permitting me to review your work. Keep writing and offering your work for review. Blessings, Bertie