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 Pet Party  [ASR]
Writer's Cramp Contest Entry - 9/8/10 - A party for pets
by Jeff
Review of Pet Party  
Review by Noyoki
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Jeff ,

My Thoughts:

This is an idea that I've toyed with before, but haven't yet written. I like how yours played on the typical little girl concept so many of us know and love from our own childhoods. When I was a young girl, my friend and I had a wedding for our two cats (who hated each other), but for us it was just pure fun.

My Favorite Part:

That the pet is a human, and the little girl an alien. People love to assume that aliens will come either to kill us, or to make allies of us, but there is a better than equal chance that they'll just see us the way we see animals. Clever creatures, temperamental, and quite good at escaping their cages, but deeply entertaining all the same.

My Suggestions:

One suggestion I have would be to do a companion piece to this from the human's perspective.

Thank you,

~Noyoki

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