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General Comments and Emotional Impact

The poem is about that one historical and significant hill on which stood a tree. Reading the poem, made me understand the significance that this hill held and also the story behind it. The font and formatting is very good. Nice picture of the One Tree Hill to go with the poem.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern in the poem of the form a,a,b,b. There is a consistent rhythm that helps with the flow of the poem. This is a free verse poem.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and simple yet to the point.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall

An excellent poem and I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda





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