Hi Irina Serban ,

Happy Birthday from WDC

The Heart of the Story/Poem:
A story about a wanderer trying to figure out their path. They finally accept they ARE a wanderer at the end.

Things That Might Make It Better:
I would lose the ellipses, they are used too frequently. It tires the reader.


Things I Like:
You wrote: Now let me open my eyes and dream... My heart has just found a new path. I think this line is beautiful.

I believe with some revising, editing or polishing it would be a 4.5. Keep writing!

Grace L
"Showering Acts of Joy Group" 

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