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 | Scars  [13+] I'm hoping this will tell people how self-harmers feel.  |
| (5.0)| I am reviewing your work as a "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" member, disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Title: Scars Scars got my attention because I wanted to know the meaning of your title to your word art and why you decided to use this word in your title. Description: I'm hoping this will tell people how self-harmers feel.Although I personally havn't been through a situation like what you describe, it is close to me because my sister tried to kill herself several times. Thankfully God has been merciful and she is still here with me. For this reason, I can relate to what you are sharing in your words and the way you are picking and placing those words in your poem. I'm a bit ahead of myself because some of this information should be placed under another category.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: I could feel the pain and hurt through your carefully chosen and placed words. Because of this the situation and circumstances come alive for the reader. I had no trouble seeing and feeling the picture of disrepair and loneliness as well as the distance created because people didn't know, didn't understand, or didn't want to face reality. You showed very well how someone in this life style would think and feel. plot: Hopefully people will have more open and listening and understanding hearts so that this plot can be changed for the better and good of people who are suffering this kind of life style. Unfortunately, people are focused on other things rather then caring about other people, helping them, and giving of their time and energy to listen and be friends to those who need their support and understanding. I think saying people, are people people, people, so get with the program and give of your time and understanding so we can help each other. The bottom line is often listening and relating to someone will make a huge difference in a persons life. This is basically what your plot in your poem is all about and more. Rhythm: The rhythm for me is easy to read through. I had an enjoyable flowing read of your poetry.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S) How are you? Did you write this poem because of your experiences, or the experiences of someone you know. Either way, whenever you want to write, let me know and we can communicate as much as we need. The only challenge for me is that I don't always have a lot of time to spend on the computer, so sometimes do not look at the email messages. i will get back to you as soon as I see your message.  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: Do you not see, The pain you cause, Festers in me, She then took a pause. I can relate to the amount of courage and strength it took for getting to the point of speaking out about the truth of what was unseen by people because they either didn't want to know, or didn't recognize there was a problem and help was desperately needed. I'm not alone, There are others too, Your hearts of stone, Know the truth. This is awesome because it is so true and needs to be brought to peoples attention!  CONCLUSION(S) I'm very glad you wrote this poem because I know that it will make a difference and help people to understand this kind of situation and how they can help someone in need of friendship and someone to listen to what they have to say. My thoughts and Impressions: Please keep creating your word art and letting people know about the things which matter to you. I have a better understanding about the situation now, thank you very much. Much thanks for allowing me to read and review for you. Safe travels and many blessings. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    The "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" are out in force today raiding the ports of WDC for The "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" as a member I'm reviewing today raiding the ports of WDC for WDC authors artists who create using word art! Please enjoy!! Please enjoy! You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com.  ** Image ID #1533880 Unavailable ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 12/08/2013 @ 10:21pm EST