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| I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Be Stillcaused my heart and spirit to leap for joy and hope. I recognized the words in a very close and spiritual meaning. My hope was that your word was about what I suspected and had much hope for. I had to know, so looked at your description, then was surprised yet understood the words you chose to describe what I was about to read. Description: Just a remindercaused me pause because I had hoped to find other words. Of course, I hadn't yet read your writing, so also was thinking that perhaps I could help you reach out with descriptive words which would give the potential reader a compelling reason to need to read what you wrote.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS Wonderful!  I LIKE What and why: For there is NO greater strength to lift you than that of GOD! Is my most very, very favorite because it says mega volumes about God and is so super uplifting to me.  I feel like through your writing God is reminding me about being still and about who He is and what He can do as well as His love for me. I'm full of joy and happiness reading and reviewing your wonderful word art. Hum, no disrespect meant, because I just had this thought aboyt GOD meaning good ole dad. God is my Father in heaven and from an earthly stand point it is interesting to me that I had this thought while thinking about your writing and reviewing for you.plot: The plot is I believe from God to you so that you can share with many readers what He wants them to know. This is what stood out to me and made a huge impact. Be still in the face of anger and resentmentI have no doubt that through you, God was reminding me to slow down think, decide to be still, and wait on Him for guidance. I've had many years of life experience, challenges, and situations which have built up and now when I find myself dealing with problems, I try but often am unsuccessful keeping my calm uplifted spirit and unfortunately the frustration, anger, or other emotion gets in the way and I have my tantrum. I do not want to do this and have talked with God about this, so right now, it is a work in progress to follow Gods lead and be more like Him. I'll do better every time I go through these frustrating and anoying experiences because of Gods love for me. This is some of what made a major huge impact on me when I read your God given word art. I truly believe it was meant for me as well as other readers, but, I take with a smile and uplifted heart and spirit very personally, thank you very much. Rhythm: Reading your words was a spiritual up uplifting which had me soaring high and very smoothly and happily reading and holding onto every word. For me this is a treasure chest of reading delight and there were no bumps along the word pathway. It reads either way for me; prose or poetry. I enjoy both and because of the special message just for me and God giving you the words to share with me, it couldn't be better if you tried to make it any more smooth and enjoyable.  OBSERVATION(S) The description, Just a reminderis telling readers that you are reminding them, does not give any information explaining what you wrote as in what is it about. May I respectfully and humbally suggest that you consider these thoughts, please. I know this comes from your heart and your whole being. I could feel this in my spirit as I read your words. You could write From my heart, Then what about the feelings you are conveying to the reader? This is very spiritual uplifting. It is about being still and listening in spirit as well as physically. Also, I feel it is mostly about the love of God and Him wanting a relationship and close friendship with us. He, God is always inviting us to spend time with Him. Along with this is the way you feel and how you would want to invite people to get to know God, spend time with Him, and have the same uplifting experiences just for them. I am thinking at the moment I might write something like Our Relationship experiences with God These are the thoughts running around in my head, so certainly, it is entirely up to you about editing or not editing, and how you proceed with this process. I realize that people are different and therefore have different experiences. There are many other people, places, and things, spiritual and physical which people give credit to for our lives. For me I give all credit to God. This is what I get out of your poem is that it is pointing to God, so I have written my suggestions with this view in mind. If I were the author of this writing, I wouldn't change from this point of view, just mentioning that there are other points of view, so that you can think about how to reach people who do not know about or know God. QUESTION(S) Would you please keep listening to God, writing and sharing what He has to say, and let me know when you get the urge in your spirit to alert me to read something you wrote? Much thanks!  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: Write and share! My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: Be Still, I was after re reading those wonderful words given to you by your heavenly father which you wrote and shared with me. I paused..smiled..then was aware that the feelings I felt from the beginning of reading your work all through until now are stronger than ever. I feel like God is well pleased with your writing, as I am also.  CONCLUSION(S) I'm full of happiness and joy! My thoughts and Impressions: You gave the gifts from God of an uplifted heart, spirit, and emotions as well as bring me close to His message especially for me. For this, I thank you. I appreciate the hug which I recei9ved when I read your word art. Please keep writing and building your relationship with God. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your written heart felt thoughts. Safe travels and many blessings. Wright with might for God and His glory!This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    The "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" are out in force today raiding the ports of WDC for WDC 13th anniversary! Please enjoy!  Welcome to WDC from all of us at "Invalid Item"  Join us for some coffee and conversation in the "Invalid Item" You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com.  ** Image ID #1533880 Unavailable ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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