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Mandy This is review #6 of 6 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " You entered the 114th round at "Invalid Item" . This means that I am here to review your entry. I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it. First of all, let me Thank You, for allowing me to review your work. Remember that reviews are the opinions of those reading, and ultimately, the choice is yours on whether or not you choose to alter your item based on the input of others.
You may have noticed that we are already on another round. However I didn't get all of the entries reviewed, and needed to do so for my own piece of mind. I didn't want anyone to think I had forgotten them. Hugs to you for being so patient and waiting. This was a very dark entry. I viewed it as a serial killer and how he viewed his prey. This actually gave me chills up the spine and it was worse reading it the second time once I was sure a killer was at hand. A very well written poem. It sparked action and reaction from this reader. I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors. Truly a wonderful piece of art.
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