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a very creative poem that the form used and the layout of the displayed poem all work to serve as a metaphor for people moving through life without the interaction from those around them. Though they are part of the community, they are separated by space.


A well written poem, however the lack of capitalization was a question for me. Was that on purpose to further illustrate the lack of cohesion or was there another reason for it? I understood no punctuation, that simply does not fit for this piece.


Overall well written and beautifully displayed.

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