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Review of Deer Meadow  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello PandaPaws Licensed VetTech : *Smile*

I have the honor of reviewing your writing for "Simply Positive Review Forum "  and as part of your auction package from the Blog City Fair.

Please remember I am a writer, who, like yourself, is also reviewed by her peers; therefore, I know what it feels like! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

*StarG* TITLE *StarG*

The title is excellent and fitting for the contents of your poem. Excellent! *ThumbsUp*

*StarP* SPELLING, GRAMMAR, & PUNCTUATION *StarP*

Regarding spelling, grammar, and punctuation, I could find no errors. Perfect! *ThumbsUp*

*StarO* CHOICE OF WORDS/READABILITY *StarO*

Choice of words is excellent and makes for good readability. When I read the poem out loud, I did not stumble or falter. The rhythm was was wonderful and the poem flowed beautifully. I could understand the poem clearly and it told a story, which I enjoyed immensely. Great job with this! *ThumbsUp*

*StarV* FAVORITE PARTS *StarV*

I enjoyed the entire poem, but let me tell you about some of my favorite parts:

*stargray* Grazing upon winter wheat
deer scamper on cold, hooved feet,
through drifts of fresh-fallen snow - I CHOSE THESE LINES BECAUSE IT TELLS QUITE A STORY. I COULD PICTURE THE DEER IN THE WINTER, AND THE PART ABOUT THE COLD, HOOVED FEET MADE ME SHIVER. GREAT JOB! *ThumbsUp*

*stargray* some deer fall upon their knees.
Those with the strength and the might
fight their hunger through the night. - I CHOSE THESE LINES BECAUSE IT TELLS OF THE POOR DEER AND THEIR PLIGHT THROUGH THE COLD HARD WINTER. IT IS SO SAD, REALLY. GOOD JOB. *ThumbsUp*

*stargray* find themselves getting stronger.
Soon a blade of grass peeks through;
Spring will start its dance anew. - I CHOSE THESE LINES, THE FINAL LINES IN YOUR POEM BECAUSE IT TELLS OF SPRING, A RAY OF HOPE, FINALLY AFTER THE LONG WINTER. I BREATHED A SIGH OF RELIEF! EXCELLENT. *ThumbsUp*

*StarY* OVERALL RATING/FINAL THOUGHTS *StarY*

I give this poem an overall rating of *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star* for its creativity, originality and the ability to paint a picture in the reader's mind. You have done an excellent job with the imagery in this poem. I was able to see the meadow covered with the snow and the deer trudging through the drifts of snow in search of food. The poem flows very nicely - yes I thought you did a very nice job in this area. I also enjoyed the ending because you bring in hope with the coming of spring. Overall, this is an excellent effort. You keep writing and I'l keep reading! *Smile*

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