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 | Hasty Lives  [E] passing without a breath of meaning  |
| (5.0)   SIMPLY POSITIVE & TRADITIONAL POETRY GROUP LEADER Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"   Hello Storm Writer .  Keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this reader whose intention is to help, not to criticize in any way. ERRORS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were noticed.  SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the entry. OVERALL IMPRESSION: The form is used perfectly, the flow moved along good too. You did a super job of relaying how emotions and feeling have little meaning before fading away in the poem, or that is what I think. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Sherri  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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