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 My First Beer  [13+]
How my dad and I shared our first beer together.
by John Nation
Review of My First Beer  
Review by Riverd0g
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Plot and Content: I found this item with the random review tool. I like the way you introduced the era you wrote about by providing information about what American life was like in 1959. It really created a mood, and made me feel like I was back there experiencing that time. I am sorry for your loss, maybe by writing about this and sharing it with others it will encourage some not to drink.

Errors/Suggestions: I didn't encounter any technical errors of any kind.

What I liked: I like the way you described the era you wrote about, and I'm glad your experience inspired you to avoid alcohol. I haven't drank alcohol in several years myself, it is definitely bad news.


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