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Indeed, like youth in human seasons, spring in nature lasts for a short while. This poem shows its beauty, its short life and how best we take delight in it.

The pleasure of spring is wedged between winter and summer. It is the same delightful part of the year wherever it may be. Flowers smile and breezes blow gentle. It is moderately cool and the nights are velvety.

The form-
Stanzas with short lines remind me of haiku. Words are used with economy and create deep impressions of visual images and easy feelings.

Imagery-
It is spring time. The poem shows the vistas of spring and the makes us feel the whispers of winds. We live through this season as if we are living through a lovely dream, short and unforgettable.

It flows well.

Write on!
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