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 | Witches Brew  [E] Visual Poetry - Not formating like in word  |
| (5.0)  Welcome to WDC Mistress of the West! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!  This is such a fantastic creative creation. It is amazing how you had the words fit the image of a cauldron! The title fits the theme.The opening line reperesenting streaks of steam is brilliant!  You set the scene witht eh word "whispering" as it gives me the notion of secret place. The vocabulary is well chosen for the theme and woven effectively to create vivid imagery and soundscape Bits of alliteration add to the atmosphere as well. I liked the bit of rhyme and the end and the concept of waitng for thier brewed wishes to come true. I like that you allow the audience to ponder on what those might be! Stirs the imagination.In the title "Witches" should be possessive form with apostrophe I think. I enjoyed reading the dramatic poem aloud and could imagine the scene clearly. Well brewed weaving taking palce in the dark where they whisper in secret. Thanks for sharing your witchy craft.   Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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