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| (4.0)| HI troy! Happy Earth Day!   I was intrigued by the title and theme of the haiku. How unique!  Asa haiku it has a natural theme and follows the syllable and line rules, except maybe for line 1. I think it has 6 syllables instead of 5. Still it is a cool topic. Also you do not need captials or periods in haiku form. the idea is to let it flow in psace for us to ponder beyond the lines.  The Haiku captures a moment in time in the fall. I like how the last line is contrasting from flowers in the second. I suddenly saw squirrels and chipmunks gathering nuts.  Thanks for sharing your wonderful haiku.  You might like "Haiku Hunt Contest" Light on the path as you write on! eyestar  
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