Dear Odessa Molinari ,
How did I come across your piece?
I am reviewing your story as a judge for "What a Character! : Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! This review is done in order to recognize your participation in the contest, as well as for me to read each entry and place my decision in with the others . We thank you for your continued support.

 I hope you can gather some useful information from the review, even if it is just to find out whether or not I enjoyed reading your piece. Remember, I am but the reader, the story is yours and you alone can decide if anything should be altered. I can merely offer my advice and opinions on what I am reading. My intentions are pure, to never do harm, only offer my view.

They say you can't judge a book by its cover and it appears that the lady of the house is of no exception to that rule. She has some of her own that she would like to keep hidden.

This story could have gone in many directions. The author chose to go in a direction far from the general course and give some excitement and allure to the events at hand.

Overall a good story, free of grammar, spelling and punctuation error. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to more from this author.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .