Review number # 2 of week July 24-30, 2014

Hi Rhyssa

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed!Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Twelve Months of Christmas

First Impression: Wow, this prompt was not easy to create into a poem.

What I liked: The creativity of the poem using the prompt. I am in awe!

What needs your attention: February line, I believe it would sound better dreary not drear. Also I think visually if you centered the poem it would reflect your confidence in your work to the reader. You have every reason to be proud, it is excellent.

Favorite Parts: Halloween with Christmas elves, great idea.

Overall Impression: I thought the poem flowed very well, was quite enjoyable to read. Excellent job!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .