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Plot and Content: Wow, this was an impressive love poem! It sounds like you really love this person, and the things you wrote about could apply to any two people in love. I think anyone in love could relate to this poem, you did an excellent job.

Errors/Suggestions: I didn't encounter any technical errors of any kind, this was an awesome poem!

What I liked: I like the part about growing old and still accepting the person you love, and wishing you could go back to your youth with each other. That is so relatable to me.