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 Snowflake  [E]
the last snowflake of winter
by Cass--Spring Spirit
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Cass--Spring Spirit

Congratulations on having this poem featured in the poetry newsletter.

You use some wonderful descriptive phrases to bring this winter scene to life.

I found the poem a little uneven in its pace -- probably due to the large variance in line length with a couple of particularly long lines.

Otherwise I found this a vivid, beautiful poem and very much enjoyed reading it.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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