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 Snowflake  [E]
the last snowflake of winter
by Cass--Spring Spirit
Review of Snowflake  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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The swirling white started the image but the 'final gasp' of Old Man Winter was great! That was just fantastic to exemplify the last flake. I loved it!

Such a delicate phrase,-'beckoning' and the crystalline fingertips. Especially when you later mention about going out to dance with your daughter. i loved that part. Amazing what joy a single snowflake can bring. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
love, LinnAnn

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