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*Frog* A tale of intrigue as many fail to question, they simply guawk and stare. The information one could learn if only they took the time to find the answers.

*Frog*Starting a sentence with a conjunction, but, or, and , creates an incomplete sentence for the reader. These three words are coordinate conjunctions used to join sentences or part of sentences that have the same grammatical status. Avoid beginning a new sentence with a coordinating conjunction (for,and,nor,but,or,yet,so). Coordinating conjunctions should be used for connecting between items of the same class within a sentence. In formal or academic writing situations, in particular, they should not be used to introduce a new sentence. Though the use of conjunctions to start sentences is becoming more of a norm in today's writings, it is still frowned upon in many writing circles. When used with slang terminology, the use of conjunctions to start sentences is a commonality. I have now come across two main circumstances where this happens repeatedly. The first is when the writer is putting to print exactly as they speak, and the other is with addressing or speaking to or for a younger audience.


*Frog*Not quite the ending I was expecting and I found myself laughing out loud to the computer screen. This delivered a smile to an unexpecting person. Thank you.

*Frog*Overall a wonderful story and a joy to read. Thank you for sharing.




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