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Behind The Door  [E]
What lies within the dark corner of a poet's mind? (Form: Trijan Refrain)
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review of Behind The Door  
Review by Teerich - 2019
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi there, 🌕 HuntersMoon

This is from the *Suitheart*

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*Smile* teerich here. Hey, good buddy, I almost missed this as I didn't recognise your new handle.

I am a writer just like you.
I am not here to judge you.
Please bear in mind that anything I say is just my humble opinion.

It is my honour to read your work.
Use whatever you can and send the rest fluttering off into the ether for another day.

I am reviewing your poem, "Behind The Door"  as it was listed in "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~" 

*Burstg* Personal Impression

I was interested to see how you would tackle the Trijan Refrain.

The cover graphic and header is intriguing.
I wanted to know what does lie within the poet's mind?

I liked the fact that you explained the form at the bottom of the page.

*Burstv* Tone & Mood

The mood is suitably dark.
It explores the 'festered thoughts' and 'evil blackness' which stalk the poets mind.
It equates the words inside the mind to'Cascading ink'

*Burstr* Rhyme, Form & Flow

The rhyme scheme and meter for the form is adhered to perfectly.
The Form is beautifully executed.
The poem flows with a lyrical quality.

*Burstg* Emotional Impact

I loved every line of this expertly crafted poem.
Its powerful exploration of how the dark side of the mind of a poet works resonated with me.
I empathise strongly with the sentiments expressed.
I have often found that my muse comes, insistently, in the middle of the night and, cannot be silenced.

*Burstv* Grammar/Punctuation

There were no problems apparent with these aspects.

*Burstb*Poetry Devices noticed and used effectively

Form perfectly executed.
Rhyme and Meter enhance the lyrical qualities.

Strong imagery.


Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to read your work.

sincerely,

teerich

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