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 The struggle  [18+]
This is a struggle about good and evil, confusion vs peace.
by Novice
Review of The struggle  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost*I was looking for something new by someone new to the site! I would like to wave the warmest of welcomes to you! *Hand1*

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think this is about choices one makes. There is faith and there is a sort of emptiness. Faith is something that is more akin to the light and the absence of faith represents darkness and chaos.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I guess the bottom line I come away with is you have to make your own choice and now matter who wins, you will have live your life in a way that is right for you. No one can make it for you.

I applaud the honesty in this piece. This part, in particular, struck a chord:

"There is peacefulness conquering the darkness and a light that shines like it was the only bulb in the world."

This is a very eloquent affirmation of faith.

Well done and welcome!

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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read.

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