Hi there, murphyco Teerich - 2019 here with a review from the I am a writer just like you. I am not here to judge you. Please bear in mind that anything I say is just my humble opinion. It is my honour to read your work. Use whatever you can and send the rest fluttering off into the ether for another day I am reviewing your poem, "Invalid Item" today as part Level 3 in the Senior Mods Birthday Challenge. I found this on The Writers Cramp The header gives clear information about the poem. If you added a cover image it would increase the visual impact. It satisfies the contest requirements with great wit. I love the irreverent tone of this poem. The picture it paints is decidedly wacky. I laughed out loud as I imagined the scene in my head. The poem is couched in 7 quatrains with perfect rhyming couplets. The rhymes flow naturally and are unforced. My favourite line Ricardo moved back and the last birds were first This nonsense poem is a joy to read. Grammar and Punctuation are exemplary. Thank you so much for allowing me the privilege of reading your work. I hope my remarks are of use to you sincerely, teerich ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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