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Rated: E | (5.0)
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And another one for you!

My you have been prolific recently haven't you?

I love this poem. It really trips off the tongue when read aloud. It's a simple, easy read but gets the reader to think as well.

This is very clever without being obviously so.

I love the half-rhyme of 'mind/rhyme'. So effective.

You make every word count but the first four lines especially just totally blew me away.

No hesitation in giving 5 stars.

Hugs,
Mark xxx


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