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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Fran 💜 💜 💜

For a first attempt at a haiku, this is a really good effort. I particularly like the change in tone in your last line which made me smile. I totally agree that rain can still be annoying even when it looks beautiful.

I count the syllables in your poem as 5, 6, 5 rather than the more traditional 5, 7, 5 but variations on the traditional format are increasingly common so this isn't in any way a bad thing.

Thanks for putting a smile on my face with this.

Best wishes,
Mark


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