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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello sybarrios

This is a lovely, positive, life-affirming poem on nature and spirit. You have a wonderful message here of courage, integrity, trust and love.

I like the change in structure in the middle of the poem from rhyming couplets to four line stanzas. This fits well with your introduction of the voices of the animals.

Your rhyme scheme breaks down in the middle of the poem (your 5th and 6th stanzas don't rhyme) but this doesn't disrupt the pace and rhythm of the poem as much as one might expect.

I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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