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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Moon dancer

This is a thoughtful reflection on the nature of love. You do well identifying both the positives and the negatives (how it can both make life worth living but also, at times, make us want to die). There is so much love poetry out there it's very easy to fall into the trap of clichéd, unoriginal writing. This poem is well written though and you mostly avoid this trap.

A couple of small corrections are needed. Both 'it;s' in your opening line and 'its' in your last but one line should be it's. Otherwise I didn't spot any errors.

Overall a very good piece of work, and I agree with what you have to say about love here.

Keep writing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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