Review number # 2 of week Oct.2-8th, 2014

Hi Groovy,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Whisper on the Wind

First Impression: The thoughts by the author are something all of us feel in long relationships.

What I liked: Emotions thwarted, left unattended. Yes, real life does happen and we get so wrapped up in our own world, we forget the person that was with us thru it all.

What needs your attention: The second and third stanza when I read out loud do not flow smoothly off the tongue especially the second sentence in each.

Favorite Parts: I love the closing reminding the lovers of what was. We all need that from time to time. I believe all relationships need to be reminded.

Overall Impression:

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .