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 Path Unknown  [E]
a time of questions that had no answers
by oldgraywolf
Review of Path Unknown  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Leaf1*
This is a Simply Positive Review.

*Painting* It's amazing that I happened across this poem with this particular subject matter. It tells of so many things we have been discussing over at the Native American classes offered here on the site by one of our members.

The spirituality of your poem reaches deeply and lifts the heart with the joy of realizing that one need only to accept and have faith in our Creator's plan, for He knows, and we merely try to follow the right path. *Thinker*

*Buttonpause* Yes, we are constantly tested, but then, anything worth wild is worth the work to get it.

My favorite lines:

"Shall I stand resolute in my convictions, slogging on, against an unknown outcome?
Or rather I would acquiesce to the will of the wind and move gently through what corridors it provides?"

*Bulletr* These lines truly resonate within the spirit.

Observations:

"But sometimes,,," I think you meant to place ellipses here, rather than commas. (...)

*Penb* I think if you broke up some of the longer lines and placed the whole poem in a more verse style form, it would read much smoother, allowing the reader to savor each word and pause purposefully, rather than trying to read a long line in one mouthful, so-to-speak.

Otherwise, this was an amazing read and quite inspirational soul food. *Vignette6*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch




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