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I Stalk the Night  [13+]
image prompt poem in the style of: synchronicity
by skeason
Review of I Stalk the Night  
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Balloong*Welcome to WDC skeason!. I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Cat*

*Fairyr*I was drawn to the eery title on the Read A Newbie page and was curious about the Sychronicity form. I have not heard of it. *Shock*

*Fairyr*The poem appears to follow the pattern you give in your sub note! Wow! I can imagine this is a challenge to do and make sense too. Thanks for the convenient information. *Thumbsup*

*Fairyr*Wow! This is dark with potent energy and images. I could read it with ease and it followed a coherent path.
The 2 sylavbe words in each verse were well chosen to mirror content of the verses.

*Fairyr* I would try not to use adevrbs with "LY" as they are not really vivid descriptors--more abstract.
"small moments" is interesting when I would have thought "short" moments.

*Fairyr*The voice was strong and consistent and I could hear its edgey tone.

*Starstruck*I could really imagine this being and its purpose! *Shock* And I did not see the picture prompt. ! Well done! Thanks for sharing your craft. Keep on musing!

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar
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