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 Dark Ink  [13+]
A Tattoo or is it?
by rjsimonson
Review of Dark Ink  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi rjsimonson ,

I'm reviewing as a judge of "Supernatural Writing Contest - Closed" .
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The supernatural element came in when the tatoo came t life. I also saw that the main character lost consciousness as soon as his/her tatoo was done.
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I like the way you used different color for different lines. They convey different ideas, characters, thoughts and differentiate flashback from the present. Putting the word slammed in bold created a sense of tension and emergency. I liked that very much. Color was really effective in your story.
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I know you had a word limit, so that could be the reason your story is short. If you decide to expand it, I'd like to know where and by whom the tatoo was done for the character. Was it someone who wanted to revenge or was it some witch? In short, I'm asking about why the tatoo happened to be evil.
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Keep writing such scary stories *Thumbsup*
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