3rd Review of the Week


Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...the last review of your auction package

First impressions...The imagery is again wonderful in this piece.

Was the title interesting...The title and the image both lend themselves well to the piece.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...free-verse

Was there rhythm and flow...beautifully written, your use of punctuation and repetition create a wonderful flow and rhythm within your piece.

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...
I believe the following line should end in a question mark...

Do I leave what I know is safe.

Things I would change...see above

Favorite lines:

He purrs in my ear that he can be everything I ever need.
And, sadly, I believe him.
I want to.

The imagery you intertwine in your poems is absolutely wonderful!


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