Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I was going through my list of favorite authors and you were next on my list.

First impressions...It is not nearly as bad as I would have expected...kidding. By the way you introduced them I was expecting less.

Was the title interesting...Very interesting...nothing like anticipating the worst and getting much better

Was the content rating appropriate...yes

Did you use a specific form of poetry...none noted

Did you follow the form...n/a

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...aabb

Did the rhymes seem forced...no, and the poem was very cute

Were words forced to fit syllable count...n/a

Was there rhythm and flow...yes, I loved the way you wrote this piece

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...nothing

Favorite parts/lines...just the fact that I have parked outside the lines, because of snow and when it melts my co-workers love to point out that I am outside the lines.

Very cute


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